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Re: Conrad's Critique Center
So my last two "Will Review for Food" threads got buried. Here's this one. :) I will review all fiction except for hard fantasy. You will have to talk really ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Eden looked the Latino girl over as she stalked to the other bed. This was an unexpected contingency. He could make do though. At least he had hidden his gun ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: The Grey Ghosts
Name:Orelaus Age: 20 Gender: Male Occupation: Archer/Prospective Mercenary Species: Centaur Appearance: Well built, young looking. Does not wear clothing, but keeps bow and quiver on his back. Various
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Eden listened to the people in the room next to him, his ear pressed up against the wall. He smiled. One was naive, the other cocky. Strengths and weaknesses, that ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Eden walked in the front door, duffel bag slung over his shoulder. He cast anxious glances around him before walking to the receptionist. "Ah, who are you?" she asked. "Eden. ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
I'd be perfectly comfortable with starting it now. I second a lot of Hannah's questions, namely the one about bringing in secondary characters.
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Jupiter Kilo Delta
Alpha Ceti Delta, this is Eagle 32. The paradigm has gone renegade.
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (2)
Hey, Ky, here I am. Okay, now I am hooked. I just had a little bit of trouble getting past your first section. So, the first part of this section ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (1)
Well Ky, here I am. Sorry it took me so long to get to this. So, overall, this is a good story. It's not really my cup of tea, as ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Name:Eden Gender:Male Age:17 Ancestor:Taskmaster(Marvel Universe)(his grandfather on his mother's side) Alliance:hero Appearance:medium build, black hair, brown eyes Personality:kind, but paranoid and
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: The Comedian
At last comes the comedian Lover’s pal and cynic’s friend to laugh aloud at all the world through pain it’s blindly hurled What’s so funny, laughing man? ‘I still laugh ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: So, you want to be an instructor/greeter?
Here's my question. If someone makes a big deal about applying for Greeter/Instructor, like talking about it in their blog beforehand and complaining about it afterwards, does that hurt their ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Money
It was an ordinary burlap sack. A little on the small side perhaps, but ordinary just the same. I almost didn’t look into it. At first I thought it was ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Empty Spaces Pt. 2
When the light faded, Draper found himself lying on the floor of the abandoned building. Night had fallen, blending the shadows of the place together. Something cold was pulling itself ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Empty Spaces Pt. 1
The streets of the town were lonely, save for the dust that the breeze stirred up on occasion; forming into tiny vortexes that waltzed down the abandoned thoroughfares until the ...
Feb 15, 2009
